I enjoyed reading this! I'm so curious to learn more about the Harris's. Of course I'm curious to learn about what the coin exactly does (where are they going?!) but I'm also intrigued by their relationship. I think my favorite part of this story is the subtle conflict between Mr. and Mrs. Harris.

Your pacing and description was spot on imo. You've painted a clear & interesting picture but kept the story moving. Hope I get to read more about this mysterious couple!