This story really draws the reader into Edward’s struggle between guilt and redemption. The pacing keeps the suspense alive, and the presence of the ghost makes the emotional weight even heavier. I found the ending powerful, with Edward finally confronting his secret and seeking peace not just for himself but also for the girl he wronged. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece.
RE: Fiction: The shadow of the past (La sombra del pasado) [EN/ES]