This is a sweet story, Hive account@ppvicente. I liked Emma's character very much. She is one of those eccentric old ladies with an odd way of dressing and some interesting habits, but a heart of gold. It's good that Charlie got to go and say goodbye.

There were a few things in your story that confused me, but I have some tips for you, which I hope you will find helpful. In the opening, if you gave us the "setting" then we would understand who is talking. For example, you could start the story with something like "John and Charlie, two brothers, sat on the porch of the home where they grew up." Then we could see them and understand the context of their conversation. Then a few times you spelled John's name differently, so I was also wondering if there was a third person. So if you changed "Jhon" to John in those places, it would keep the reader from being confused.

My last tip is about the pronouns. Whenever you are referring to Emma, it should be "she" and "her," not "him" and "his."

Good luck and keep writing!