Whoah!! Stories that ends like this are my best. They raise series of questions in you like will she be banished, will she really be justified - because I see no justice done anywhere. Tales of two prince with one brainwashed by the whites to desire civilization and the other, who happens to be the senior one, being corrupted by power. It was a good thing Akin got to the scene in time when he did.
I never knew you write stories ooooo... This is too good!
RE: Theinkwell Writing Prize | A Tale of Two Prince and a Queen.