This is a very nice story, Hive account@adhyaksaardaus. You manage to convey a message without preaching. Often, when a writer uses a story as a vehicle for a message, it can feel a bit artificial. This feels fine. We like very much your vivid descriptions and also your explanation for how the little girl got separated.

Good conflict resolution. Thank you for sharing this with us We appreciate that you engage with other writers in the community.