Hello Hive account@cindy911

This seems to be your first post in the community. Welcome!You have a clear writing style. That is great. This post is a little brief for our community. We usually expect the pieces submitted by writers to have a little more development.

You tag this as fiction, but it reads as nonfiction. Not a problem, but in the future it would be good to be clear about that.

Please acquaint yourself with our rules. We are a receptive community and welcome both fiction and creative nonfiction. Also, we expect our writers to support others in the community by commenting on at least two other pieces for each one submitted.

Thank you. Have fun writing!