Hello Hive account@henryjnrr,

Thank you for referring us to that comment. Please note that nothing in your comments refers specifically to Hive account@treasuree's story. We characterize that as a generic comment--same comment could be posted under any story about adulting. Please be more specific in the future.

Also, the formatting in this story is peculiar. It's not clear if you are trying to write verse, or it just looks that way. We only accept prose pieces in this community.

We have curated the story because we like it, but in the future keep these points in mind.

Thank you!