hello Hive account@huncho124. This read like a true story from your life. Please be careful to write correctly for the prompts as the hope prompt was the fiction prompt for this week. Having said this, it was touching to read a post filled with such gratitude and appreciation for your mom. I'm glad that the two of you managed to persevere and that you have now completed your University education. Congratulations!

Your submission would benefit from a spellcheck, and grammar and punctuation edit. There are some exceptionally long sentences which combine numerous thoughts in a long string of words, making it a challenge to read and not giving the reader a chance to take a breath. If you want to improve your writing, please focus on editing your work before publishing.

Thank you for writing in The Ink Well.