Hello Hive account@ji33y,
This is an interesting, engaging story. You achieve the main goal of any writer: you hold our attention. The reader wants to know 'what happened'. The end is good, even though it concludes with a question. The resolution of the story is fine...the lovers are together and go off into the future together. "Who is Chuck" is kind of funny and titillating...OK though.

However, curating this story has issues: the image sources are not clear. Please correct that so we can curate. Please tell us where each image comes from and provide a link. The links under the pictures don't work.

Also, for such an interesting story it is worthy to note that some stylistic changes would improve the readability. Most significantly, your sentence structure is a bit off. Instead of periods you have commas, so that the first paragraph especially reads like a run on sentence. This distracts from the quality of your writing. A good edit would improve the story.

Thank you for sharing this interesting narrative with the Ink Well community. We appreciate that you engage with other authors.

Keep writing...we hope to hear back from you about the images so we can curate properly.