It’s wonderful that Amecia emerges victorious, overcomes poverty and uplifts her family. Thank you for sharing your story with us on The Ink Well.
For a short story to emerge as victorious, it’s a good idea to add conflict to the tale. For instance : if Amecia learns to fight to overcome a bully. Read The Ink Well’s fiction tips, which are pinned to the top of the community’s page.
RE: Fight for opportunity.