Hi Hive account@muba04. Thank you for sharing your imaginative story in The Ink Well. Before we curate, we just ask that you edit the following line, in compliance with our rules about violence, which are posted at the top of The Ink Well community page:

before Rufus could try another trick raging fire ball from Billy was stoned at Rufus which made him burn till his death.

We also recommend some formatting, as it is very difficult to read stories where the words are all run together. If you add a space between each paragraph, others reading your stories will not have to work so hard. It also helps readability to add a space after each comma. Thank you.

Have you checked out our catalog of fiction writing tips? It provides helpful articles on fiction writing. You might benefit from the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.