This is a beautifully written article about your journey, Hive account@zino01. It shows that inner drive, commitment and a desire to succeed make an enormous difference in the outcome. We simply cannot be complacent if we wish to improve our station in life. It takes hard work an a vision.

All that said, we'd like to recommend that you bring an article like this to life with action, dialogue and characters. While you have shared your history and journey in a very interesting way, we are missing the elements that make it a story. For example, you could describe some of the real life "characters" along the way that you interacted with at the time when you were seeking to rise out of your circumstances ‐ whether they were people who encouraged you, those who were stuck and had no dreams, or those who laughed at yours.

Please also use the #creativenonfiction tag. As you probably know, if you have read our article on tips for creative nonfiction stories, we don't accept just any nonfiction. We are looking for creative nonfiction stories, which have a lot in common with fictional stories. Hopefully that is helpful!