Wow, this one hurt.
This community houses some great writers! 👏
The way you wrote Victoria’s trembling, her rehearsed scripts, her silence, it felt so real, like I could almost feel that lump in her throat myself. The arc of building up all those unsaid words, only for it to end with a cup slipping and Margareth walking out again, was heartbreaking. It captured how some closures never come, and how sometimes the goodbye is just… silence.
Well written.
RE: Victoria...and Margareth (English/Spanish)