Welcome to Hive. I bet with time and practice anything get better even though we see them as "good". I think you are going somewhere with this but it is hard to see out of just one picture. Also, I can recommend you to talk about yourself (writing an introduction blog), how you found about Hive, and if there is, who told you (including them by tagging). Maybe you could put more pictures we can see.
I invite you to explore other communities you might like that are part of the OCD Communities Incubation Program. Check out all the communities, read their rules and post in the one that fits your content.
RE: A self learning Artist's Journey: A New Beginning