I'm quite familiar with this story and have ensured to bear the lessons in mind.
You did a good job giving a beautiful summary of it but then, it's too short.
The community rules says to ensure your word count ranges from 450 to 500 otherwise it will be ignored. And you just made that mistake.
Try not to violate the rules of any community by reading and adhering to them.
RE: WEEKLY ENGAGEMENT HIVEGHANA WK-122 TOPIC OF TIMELESS TALES