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El Burro Valiente
Érase un burro sin dientes,
muy feo pero valiente,
que vivía en una granja llena de luz y vida,
donde el sol brillaba y el aire era fresco.
Entre los animales de aquel lugar,
se encontraba Ramón, un burro sin igual.
Aunque su nobleza era evidente,
era objeto de burla y desprecio constante.
Sin dientes, su sonrisa era un misterio,
y su pelaje, aunque suave, estaba manchado,
los otros animales lo miraban con desdén,
pues su aspecto no era el que se esperaba en el corral.
Las gallinas, con sus cloqueos burlones,
se reían de él al pasar,
los cerdos lo ignoraban,
y el gallo, rey del lugar, lo despreciaba sin piedad.
Los humanos, con miradas de desdén,
lo llamaban "el burro feo",
y lo relegaban a los rincones,
donde el sol apenas podía brillar.
Pero Ramón, con su corazón sincero,
nunca se quejaba de su suerte,
sabía que su valor no estaba en su apariencia,
sino en el amor que guardaba en su pecho.
Un día, mientras el sol se ocultaba,
un rayo cayó, y el cielo se oscureció,
el granero ardió en llamas voraces,
y el caos se desató en la granja, sin compasión.
Los animales, aterrorizados, corrían sin rumbo,
mientras los humanos luchaban por controlar el fuego,
las llamas danzaban con furia y desespero,
y la noche se iluminaba con un brillo aterrador.
En medio de esta confusión, un llanto resonó,
era el bebé de la familia, atrapado en su cuna,
el humo lo envolvía, y el peligro lo acechaba,
pero Ramón, con su instinto, sintió que debía actuar.
Sin pensarlo dos veces, se lanzó hacia el hogar,
el calor era intenso, el humo lo envolvía,
pero su corazón latía con fuerza,
y su valentía lo guiaba en la oscuridad.
Con su agudo sentido del olfato,
encontró al pequeño, llorando en su cuna,
con delicadeza, lo levantó con su hocico,
y comenzó a retroceder, sorteando el peligro.
Las llamas rugían, el fuego lo acechaba,
pero Ramón no se detuvo, su misión era clara,
salvar al bebé, su corazón lo impulsaba,
y con cada paso, la esperanza brillaba.
Y a pesar de todo, logró salir al aire libre,
donde el fuego comenzaba a ser controlado,
los habitantes de la granja, atónitos, miraban,
al burro que, triunfante, traía al bebé a salvo.
El miedo se transformó en admiración,
los animales, que antes se burlaban de él,
ahora lo miraban con respeto y asombro,
mientras los humanos, con lágrimas en los ojos,
abrazaban al pequeño y a Ramón, agradecidos.
Ya no era el burro feo, sin dientes y desaliñado,
se había convertido en un héroe, respetado y amado,
los otros animales lo aceptaron y lo valoraron,
reconociendo que su valentía era lo que realmente importaba.
Ramón aprendió que la verdadera belleza,
no reside en la apariencia, sino en el corazón,
en el coraje de hacer lo correcto,
y en la fuerza de amar sin condición.
Y así, en la granja, el burro que fue objeto de burlas,
se convirtió en un símbolo de valentía y amistad,
recordando a todos que cada ser tiene un valor único,
más allá de lo que se ve a simple vista, en la verdad.
English Version
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The Brave Donkey
Once upon a time there was a donkey with no teeth,
very ugly but brave,
who lived on a farm full of light and life,
where the sun shone and the air was fresh.
Among the animals there was Ramon, a donkey with no teeth, very ugly but brave,
was Ramon, a donkey without equal.
Although his nobility was evident,
he was the object of constant mockery and scorn.
Toothless, his smile was a mystery,
and his coat, though soft, was spotted,
the other animals regarded him with disdain,
for his appearance was not what was expected in the barnyard.
The hens, with their mocking clucks,
laughed at him as he passed,
the pigs ignored him,
and the rooster, king of the place, despised him mercilessly.
The humans, with looks of disdain, called him “the ugly donkey,
called him “the ugly donkey”,
and relegated him to the corners,
where the sun could hardly shine.
But Ramón, with his sincere heart, never complained about his luck,
never complained about his luck,
he knew that his value was not in his appearance,
but in the love he kept in his breast.
One day, as the sun was setting,
lightning struck, and the sky darkened,
the barn went up in ravenous flames,
and chaos broke out on the farm, mercilessly.
The animals, terrified, ran around aimlessly,
while the humans struggled to control the fire,
the flames danced with fury and desperation,
and the night was illuminated with a terrifying glow.
In the midst of this confusion, a cry rang out,
it was the baby of the family, trapped in his crib,
smoke enveloped him, and danger stalked him,
but Ramón, with his instinct, felt he had to act.
Without a second thought, he rushed toward the fireplace,
the heat was intense, the smoke enveloped him,
but his heart was pounding,
and his courage guided him in the darkness.
With his keen sense of smell,
he found the little boy, crying in his cradle,
gently picked him up with his snout,
and began to back away, dodging the danger.
The flames were roaring, the fire was stalking him,
but Ramon did not stop, his mission was clear,
to save the baby, his heart was driving him,
and with each step, hope shone.
And in spite of everything, he managed to get out into the open air,
where the fire was beginning to be controlled,
the inhabitants of the farm, astonished, looked on,
the donkey triumphantly bringing the baby to safety.
Fear turned to admiration,
the animals, who had previously mocked him,
now looked at him with respect and awe,
while the humans, with tears in their eyes,
embraced the little boy and Ramon, grateful.
He was no longer the ugly, toothless and disheveled donkey,
he had become a hero, respected and loved,
the other animals accepted him and valued him,
recognizing that his bravery was what really mattered.
Ramon learned that true beauty
lies not in appearance, but in the heart,
in the courage to do the right thing,
and in the strength to love without condition.
And so, on the farm, the donkey that was the object of ridicule,
became a symbol of courage and friendship,
reminding everyone that every being has a unique value,
beyond what meets the eye, in truth.
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