Thank for sharing your acapella song with us Hive account@rhoda001
However, you need to note some few key things we check out for on Hive.
1. Engagement; Engagement is paramount on Hive, we expect that you follow other users and leave them your kind preview on what you think about their post. It shouldn't be too brief like "nice post, amazing post, etc" try to say something little you understand about the person's post, either their song presentation or their write ups.
2. You should increase your words count. The number of words you write to explain your choice of song is too small compared to what the community requires of you. Write atleast 200 to 250 words excluding the lyrics. You can write a lot about a particular song you're presenting, why you love the song and decided to use it for your entry, what the song entails, the original authors of the song among many other things.