You, my dear, are the queen of suspense and unexpected twists! When Jack turns out to be a member of the mob, I did not see that coming. Poor Nancy feel right into the hands of the people trying to kill her. And the uncaring Judy takes the blame for Jack's murder. Impressive!

Though your ending is open, it makes us eager to know how Nancy and Ronny will handle everything. Well done! Would you like an in-depth review of your story? Thank you for participating in the Scholar N Scribe December Invitational. !PIZZA 🙂