Well... it won't pass, no matter what i or anybody else think about it. Man, you are not in the Hive Club! Without that, you can't get free money from DHF.

So hug with those guys first, then you don't even need own proposal, they will give the money to you from valuplan. You can even ask it for building ant farm in the middle of the Sahara, it will "pass"...

Anyway, your "proposal" reached the same "standards" as valuplan props, strange that some people support that money waste, but don't want to support yours.

Get in the Club first! :)