hello friend of Hive account@article61! i would suggest you make your title longer. include in it the first sentence also :) and make it just a bit longer. you will have greater success.

here on steemit we only see the title so reading only "introduction" between hundreds of other introductions that come every hour is not so appealing to make people read more.

we are living in the era of zapping. so tell everything we need to know, all the keys words in the title :)

good luck! :)