Thanks for joining the community woodzi! I thought you were actually a girl from the handle for the longest time XD - not a bad thing online.

CC on the intro, I think it would have been great for you to actually post a title that was a little less "list-ly":

Criminally passionate photography student. Literally.

And then you could have gone from there as a rebound point.

I love that you included personal narratives but feel like you could have done a better job expanding your intro to talk less about yourself, but more about your experiences.

The two are different because people don't know who you are (and so initially aren't interested in you). If you tell interesting stories, then they might care a bit more.

ie. Don't tell me that you love fire. Tell me that : Ever since this one night you lit your first fire, emotions that happened, people that happened, etc... you found a new found love.

etc.

make sense?