Welcome! I homeschool too, and am a stay-at-home mom.
I'm going to suggest some improvements. Add the tag #introduceyourself -- that one gets the most views.
Spread out your main points into separate lines/paragraphs so that it's easier to read, or people will skip reading it.
You should insert a picture of yourself or some aspect of your life. People want to know that you are real. Some people won't give you their valuable votes until they are sure that you are real. Maybe hold up a sign that says "Steemit" with the today's date.
All the best on Steemit.