I visited and upvoted both of your post. Before hitting the post button, you want to take a look at your post for readability. On the second post you have above, it was a good improvement on the first, but the first post is always hard and getting the right HTML OR markdown can be difficult. A quick review will show you where you need an blank line. Having a blank line between paragraphs makes it easier to read.

Some people would say add pictures, but really if a post does not need pictures it does not need pictures. But do keep in mind that if you use pictures or quotes from published work they should always have a source statement of where it came from.

Let me know if there is anything else I can help you with and always feel free to use our post promotion box in our discord channel.