Very deep entry, with nice/noncliche good rhyming pattering and rhythm and I liked about 80% of it but the last few lines do raise concern. Only because I know truly how we can fail to cope with such tyranny oppression and violent abuse. We are quick to retaliate and involve innocent lives as we seek vengeance so I hope you have been able to handle your growth from these situations in a better light and I am sorry you went through what you went through. You are not alone at all. We shall stay stronger than those who had laid hands with bad intentions
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