even if you hadn't said you were a musician, I would have guessed it based on the natural rhythm of your words. you can always see music's hand in the writings of those who have spent too much time with music.

I appreciated the cyclical quality you incorporated here, your wrapping of thoughts with framing.

Not an easy read, of course, a tragic one, but you have found beauty in sadness - in particular, I think this line is brilliant:

counting days instead of sheep

Thank you for sharing, Hive account@charlotteroze, look forward to watching you grow through your pursuit of the challenge and continue to connect with your readers.