Like this a lot. Thank you for filling us in on your history with poetry and song writing. It makes sense as to why this is so well written and structured... I'd put you in the pro category personally... don't be modest now ;)

The weight of sadness and grief comes through in the words and as I read it, it was so strong that I almost felt it begin to weigh on me too.

Know that the past does not equal the future... you can always create a brighter day today... no matter what's happened in the past.

Just my 2 cents <3

Great to find you here, will be sure to keep in tune with your future submissions :)

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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