I am glad you have tried to edit the work, and include a link to the source after i earlier commented.

That is a good start. But it is still not enough, and does not qualify you for the reward. You plagiarized David Meyers work, copying word by word.

Now adding his name down doesn't change that.

Overall, plagiarism is bad. Like i said, i am a writer, and would love to see my work plagiarized this blatantly.

You must not do it again.