Hello to steemians!
Today I present you with the revised and correct version of "Annabell, demon hunters".
The city of "Moondevil" is haunted by evil creatures, called demons. A group of boys, whose leader seems to be Annabell, lives as a refugee in a building that is now abandoned, like the rest of that part of the city. Life seems to continue, even though nothing is like before; until one day, suddenly, something changes.
1 - City at night
The cold air condensed its breath in clouds of steam, rocked its thoughts and made them lighter and more bearable. Around her the night was dark, few cold stars dotted the black sky. Ann watched with increasing anxiety the little illuminated road, the lights of the houses that began to go out like a thousand, small fireflies that died one after the other. From above that palace, you could see a good part of the town of Moondevil, so she liked to go there. He felt more confident to dominate everything from above, like a sentinel who warned others of imminent danger.
Also from there, however, you had to have a good eye to see if something changed in the immobility of the night, if it was about to happen....
Ann! A voice interrupted his thoughts. Annabell "!,This is Vickie. Ann sneaked. Yes, I am here! Stop screaming ". From the stairs leading to the roof of the palace, Vickie's subtle figure appeared, wearing clothes so candid that she looked like a light bulb. He also had a flashlight in his hand. She seemed to realize that she was looking badly, because she looked down on her clothes and made a grimace. Too showy "?
Ann rise:"No, certainly not. But you shouldn't scream to call me, you know that they can hear us. But here we are safe. Vickie approached the parapet. No. Ann shook his head. We are not safe. They are there outside, somewhere. Until they leave, we will never be safe. They were now standing next to each other. Ann seemed to perceive a bit of warmth from Vickie's body. It was a great feeling. I'll hope:"Without counting that this palace is an all too obvious refuge".
What do you want to say? In Vickie's voice the dismay appeared. They will find us sooner or later. We all know that. We cannot stay here forever. But I like it here. The friend made spallucce; she did not seem disturbed by her words. Ann did not see the slightest trace of fear in her gaze. Then no one knows if they are intelligent, no?
It is true "Ann agreed," but, given that we do not know, we must behave as if they were ".
They remained silent for a few minutes. Vickie also looked at the night, but unlike Ann, she had her eyes on the stars.
Come down with us "? asked Vickie, suddenly, breaking the silence with his clear voice. He wondered how he could always be so enthusiastic despite their situation. Perhaps there was no answer. She was so.
He shook his head:"It's better for someone to stay here. But they might see you.... and then Sam is making pancakes. Say you seriously "? Annabell attacked his forehead. The friend nodded and licked her lips nodding. Samantha? But wasn't Ray the one for pancakes "?
No! Ray is what he eats them. Both broke up to laugh and for a moment Ann forgot all his thoughts and fears. Then, however, they realized that they were making a little too much noise. Okay, it's better for me to go. Who knows that you will be combining Sam with those poor pancakes.
Yes, you go ".
Seriously do not come "?
Ann did so with his head:"I don't come from Vickie, someone has to stay here.
The friend went to the stairs:"Are you sure you want to be here all alone?
Yes, I'm fine in the dark. Verily Ann was afraid, but that was not said.
I will send someone to give you the change! Vickie disappeared down the stairs. And with her she also went out the light of her stack.
Annabell remained alone. The darkness enveloped her, but this did not upset her; by now she had made us a habit. Everything else worried her; what was hidden in the dark, hidden from her gaze. Her fears collapsed on her, and she could not escape. So she stayed there, buried in the darkness, like them, watching the sparse stars go out behind a blanket of clouds.
Thank you for reading!