Things I like about it:
-his use of the f-minor melody at the beginning (B-Flat Sub)
-his 2-5 into the four.
-his semi-tone slides using chord voicings.
-his tri-tone sub on the turnaround which I screwed up on:P
I play a few rounds attempted to target thirds while using enclosures.
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