Hi Christopher. That's a good song! It has nice vibes and gives a happy feeling :)
If I can give you a suggestion, I would try to work on the structure of the piece by putting a B section.
As it is it's well played (the instrument going in and out, the drums, the percussion and the leads don't make you bored) but it's the same progression for 5 minutes. Maybe an ABA would work.
Tell me what do you think :)
RE: Original Music and ladybugs (:)