Hi. I'm a curator who runs Hive account@newbieresteem. We are a group of volunteers who help newcomers to Steemit by promoting their content and provide advice to help people achieve success. We are not automated and it's all real human eyes reading the stuff we resteem. I enjoyed your post but here are some pointers to help you out and ensure you start getting engagement with your material:

1. An image header. Sometimes an image or picture at the top of your posts helps to catch peoples eye when they are scrolling through looking for content to read. Usually something that relates to what you are writing about works best but it can be whatever you feel suits best.
2. You write really well and sincerely so maybe a couple more paragraphs. Most folks look for something not to long and not to short to engage with. You definitely show you can write engagingly so give it a go. It's sort of like figuring out a Goldilocks zone of sorts. Not to long but not to short. Creators who figure this out and get it down pat and post consistently tend to do really well on Steem.
   If you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask. If we don't respond immediately it just means we don't have anyone infront of their computers but we will certainly get back to you. Keep on Steeming. :)