Oh, man this is a stunning piece!

I'm itching to sink my teeth into all your videos when I have the time and it makes me resent the work that's currently holding me back from doing so.

You have a beautiful voice and great harmonic sensibility. To see your other open mic video, "The Executioner"—with all that tasty shredding—makes my ears gracious and hungry for more.
It is a very good thing your mentor and friend inspired the continuation of your music career for it would be a great loss if you were to not have written even just this one song.

I wish you boundless inspiration and success!

Warmest greetings from South Africa.