Awesome composition and beautiful images, it seems a little on teh choppy side though, is that just dtube or were you trying to force it to be 30 seconds?
I suspect you could make this shot look a lot better if you created a 24p sequence and ensured that your images were going by 24 per second and then maybe adding a very slight motion blur effect in after effects to make it perfectly smooth!

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