commenting is harsh, commending you did well but still need light and more of a perfection touch on what and why its nature, to feel what you're about to take deep within you before you make it a photograph....
I hope you begin to dream it before you see it,
photography is about clicking it at that perfect moment, it might be you're missing the sunrise it in or the sundown or a little bit of the shaded scorching sun on the object in view....
thanks....