Hello, my Dear Steemers.
When I read poetry, the most important is sensitivity, intuition. And rejection of fear that I do not understand, I can not. Reading the poems gives me great joy, all I need is a little focus. Of course, it is worth knowing when a given poet created, it is easy to understand his poetic world.
"What poetry is like? Many an unstable response to this question has already been made. And I do not know and I do not know and I stick to it as a salutary railing."
Wisława Szymborska
I would like to thank you for participating in the Challenge and also those who were interested in poemchallenge. I am delighted with your interest in poetry that shows how beautiful hearts and souls are among us. :)
The words that spoke to my heart and stirred my emotions.
EVANESCED INTO NOUGHT
The glittering suds we see,
is like flusters of snow,
ebbing into nonentity
just like crumples of smiles
fading into nada in the smiles
of a shuddering old man,
Our life is like the flaxen sun,
coasting home, adrift the mountains
like a plank floating away,
on the surface of the Nile
Evanescing into nought,
the flurry flowers shall flay,
crumpling like shredded weed,
smooked away like nothing,
were but nylons retreating,
into the coziness of the firmament,
wailing and hooting away,
like dirt in the whirlwind.
We're glitters in the naked lights,
camouflaged and tarpaulined,
hidden into our disgrace like yesterday's
waste, chewing our own cud
like four bellied animals at rest
evanescing into nought like decay,
rotting away, flies buzzing, caterpillars feeding.
The beauty we are brandishing,
is like a tenant, waiting a while
visiting our youthful years,
like orgasm on a cold lonely night
by dawn our chlorophyll is evaporated,
driven out of us like pimples in the cheek
and we're left desperately alone,
deforested and fermented
evanescing into utter nought
https://steemit.com/poetry/@josediccus/evanesced-into-nought-an-original-poetry-poemchallenge
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I hope you enjoy reading the poem as much as I did. I'd like to invite you to next PoemChallenge next Friday, open the wing and write my dear friends.
I hope you have enjoyed !!!
Thank you for visiting and supporting my work and those great poets who are among us. My heart always deeply appreciates your friendly words and love of poetry.
Poemchallenge rules:
How to find your poem and help to find great Steemians:
The challenge is on Friday.
Add below the tag name "poemchallenge" or add your link under the invitation to poemchallenge so I don’t lose your words.
To build a bigger community of remarkable poetry please resteem the post. Thank you for your support and helping to spread the poemchallenge to find more excellent writers.
I am expecting poems on Friday and Saturday. On Sunday I accept only if they appear before giving poetic results, which I always announce in the afternoon of my time.
My time is "Currently Central European Time (CET)"
Prizes:
First place The best poem 100% upvote and resteem by me and 
second place 100% upvote by me and
Third place 100% upvote and resteem by me. 20% upvote by
Have fun my dear don't be afraid to use your imagination, try to believe in yourself and share with us your beauty from your heart. :-))
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