MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY (LIMITLESS)........

This was inspired by my untalented contest writeup by Hive account@surpassinggoogle. Kindly patiently read through. This is my first poem, so I am open to corrections.

LIMITLESS

Here stood a bird with a broken wing
Not caged but yet couldn't leap
Could it be its weakness trying to take a swing
Or yet its imaginations hindering a sweep?

All I wanted was to fly
No external factor, at least none i know of
Internally I am a self sly
Or could i truly be a rip off?

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The bird wouldn't be swayed
It flapped the unbroken wing and fell
I am not going to get played
So I rose and who can tell?

Morning to dusk I tried
Evening to dawn I believed
Feeling so torn and dried
I at last achieved!

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Pls how is my first attempt at poetry?? Dear poets in the house, kindly come and point out my errors. Thanks.

You can read my entry to the UNTALENTED contest here

https://steemit.com/untalented/@aderonkemi/untalented-the-truth-behind-who-i-am-by-surpassinggoogle

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