Occult Culture (Spoken word poem with video)

Hey again. :)
I just uploaded another video, this one I'm both excited and nervous about. Heh.
My first spoken word poetry video!
Please be gentle! Lol.. Just kidding, I want the truth..
If it's bad, I wanna know so I can work on it and become better.

I'm not a singer, I don't rap, or anything like that.. But I've been wanting to bring more life to my poems for a long time..
And.. I figured I might as well just try spoken word, which is something I enjoy a lot and something I watch on YouTube somewhat often.

I don't think you need music to make some decent vocal artwork of such nature, though.. I did add some music as well because I thought it made it better.
Thanks to Hive account@qrittix for the music! He made a dope song that was totally the kind of vibe I was looking for for this poem.

Thanks for checking it out if you do! And I of course would very much welcome any feedback if you have any to offer, especially as this is new territory for me!
Link to the video will be below.