Rate me honey, I've change taste
Turning, restless as a bunny, with decked face
On this I've spent all my money, still, I feel caste
What else, honey, Do I still need paste.
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Buttocks check, cheeks check, then what else
In a mirror lies this conscience, saying none else
Troubled, confused, none else, what could
Inside me was this emptiness bottled.
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Far away, ages past, when children plays innocent
Told countless times : You aren't the best
A yearning to become great, men that could be recommend
Still, I see nothing, nothing, none else in the end.
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Changed face, replaced nose, more like MJ
A fairer skin, a toned complexion, everyday birthday
Emptiness lingers, nothingness grows stronger
A souless soul, mindless mind, that's what I am.
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Rate me now, watch my steps
A confidence that has depth
Looked up straight into my friend
To see I've earned there respect.
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A help I'll render forever
Pilgrims of lost hope, wailing wailers, never do better
Crushed conscienced children, silent mourners
A hope for you all, stand now, soar higher.
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