This is amazing it reminds me of the band Rise Against. Not sure if you've ever heard of them before but most of their songs are poems with war style metaphors.
"Autumn leaves in summer heat trip softly, sensuously falling over themselves" this line was so descriptive, I had the most vivid picture in my head, lying under a tree watching the leaves fall and spin down through the air towards me.
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RE: The End of the Twentieth Century [Day 1]