I enjoyed your poem. I felt I went on a journey. Not only in time but also in spirit. I did have some issue with the formatting. I use formatting to highlight and/or bring out portions of the poems I write. I don't know if this is in play here. I've copied and pasted my formatted work into steemit and it gets all messed up. The best way I found of preserving desired format is to create and then screenshot the work, and upload that pic. Thanks for sharing.