This was pretty cool man. You easily made me see what you were writing about, which is good. Would've switched "to" to "for" on the 8th line. Other than that I really liked it man.
This was pretty cool man. You easily made me see what you were writing about, which is good. Would've switched "to" to "for" on the 8th line. Other than that I really liked it man.
RE: Rhyming Diary January 11: A night walk through the woods