My dear Hive account@zentalk, although I know that I haven't been at all complacent with your writings (I've never known if they exist as songs or the like), I always try to rescue some things for me from what you publish, of course, from my point of view. In that sense, I indicate my taste for two sentences from the last paragraph of your text: "But what's a bark with no bite, a string with no kite to fly (...)" and "Guess we need to work at what we want even if the outcome 's a surprise, even if it ends up being yah if it ends up being the keys to our own demise".
Deep, dense phrases, which I can't comment on now. Greetings.