This honestly very good! Reminds me a little of one of my favourite poems, 'Lost and Found' by Maxine Chernoff, although yours takes a much more realist approach. You write so consistently, its almost a shame NaPoWriMo is over - hope we won't have to wait too long for new poems :)

Maybe you could try one of the poetry competitions here on steemit? They can be a great way to attract new readers, if that's what you're after!