I like the subtle ending for this poem. I was a bit taken back it happily surprised. Good work.
By the way, it looks like you may need some editing for better English. I'd be happy to do it for you if you would like.
I like the subtle ending for this poem. I was a bit taken back it happily surprised. Good work.
By the way, it looks like you may need some editing for better English. I'd be happy to do it for you if you would like.
RE: Notepad - useless thoughts of a worthless primate #3