To Edit or Not to Edit #poetry

Editing is free

to edit
or not to edit
I want to scream
tear at the pages
drop adjectives as I please

why would I care
freewriting away
counting words
as if
there is a finish line

I bow my head
fine
let’s edit
cut away sir
archaic prose notwithstanding

~ Hive account@nobyeni

With many thanks to the poetry lessons by Hive account@damianjayclay. Especially his latest, on avoiding cliches was very inspiring. If you are also interested in joining a group of writers who aim for quality & spend their time helping each other out, editing and commenting through a thorough peer-review system, come join Hive account@thewritersblock!

^{Here is an overview of more fiction/short stories and poetry by Hive account@nobyeni.}