Lovely poem Hive account@blanca237

I particularly liked the image of the moment of eternity frozen in a breath. It reminded me of ice crystals on the window in my bedroom as a kid in winter and my gran used to tell me it was jack frosts breath. My mum used to tell me it was my breath frozen which I much preferred the idea of lol

Eyes penetrate worlds in a single glare
As hours slip as dust in the air.
Poised, motionless she sits by the windowpane
A frozen moment of eternity in a breath.