A strong use of irony, pun and metaphors to relay your message. I'm going out on a limb and guessing the obstructions I met during the read and analysis were from fast fingers or were they intentional and if so, what exactly were you trying to communicate? I'm human and most likely missed the intended purpose.

For example,

Repeat lives verses... (stanza 1 line 1)
so why note accelerate the outcome of tomorrow? (stanza 4 line 4)

I especially love how the poem makes deductions or assumptions and turns around to ask questions to ascertain the motivation behind such a behaviour. Exquisite piece