So short, and yet I suspect that it took you far longer to write than it appears. If I am wrong, then you most certainly have a gift. For it seemed very deep and makes one think- as any good poem should do.
I had no idea that poetry could do so well on here. I did only have one try though. Your poem, and its worthy rewards, have inspired me to have another go at one for myself. I thank you for this.
RE: Terry's Poetry Tryings. The Longest Road.