I really like it Hive account@angelveselinov. The frequency of your use of "I" is completely warranted, it is called "When I fall", after all!

I found every verse provoked some memory or thought, and I particularly liked the last half. Especially "Two like me will rise", it made me think that it would be "someone like me" who would help me up.

Also the imagery from; "I fly to meet the ground" is inspired. Great piece, thank you!