This sounds really cliché "cried oceans of tears" the metaphors are really tired. The poem itself isn't bad, it just needs to be more original. Try putting more thought into the different metaphors you use.
This sounds really cliché "cried oceans of tears" the metaphors are really tired. The poem itself isn't bad, it just needs to be more original. Try putting more thought into the different metaphors you use.
RE: ILLUMINATED! {An Original Poetry}